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Review of The White Rose  Open in new Window.
Review by cody blue Author IconMail Icon
Rated: 13+ | (3.0)
You have the words. Great story. But.. Missing intent on paragraphs 5 spaces is good

.....Nanny poured another coffee etc.

Anyway I think you got the right idea .
write 500 words at a time, this should give you some great skills
You can also look up words and etc on your computer.

Good luck, Like I said great letter
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Review of A Young Nation  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (3.0)
I like your poem, I don't know what to add since tour tried so hard.

nice job
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