This story seems to be good so far. There are only 2 major issues that I can see from what I've read (free member just so you know). First is the there seems to be a lot of dead ends, but thats only natural. The second is that the fetishes included are much to specific. Maybe some more general ones like making everyone anthro or futanari.
So far this story looks good. The only real issue I can see is that there are far too many dead ends. While It'd be too tedious for me to check every option, due to being a free member, here are some sugestions for the naruto path. There needs to be a futa option for gender and an idea for the second choice in ch7:something different, would be kurama being in heat. That's all i can think of so far.
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