why did she have that scar? kinda of confusing. Should try to do more details. Is this part of a story or a book? other then it needs a bit more of details.
running and running and running. All she could do is run. This is quite well writing. I like the emotions in this. How they roll together and its not just something random. To see people are actually writing good things instead of writing the stupid stuff. I really do like it
i love how this is written. It's so true how only five minutes can truly destroy someones life, can fully change there soul, there heart. there whole meaning of life. You can fully change your whole life within five minutes. and sometimes that is scary.
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