So I've read all four chapters and thus far, I love it.
During the first chapter, however, I was a bit lost coming into it. But you cleared everything up as the story progressed and might I add, I find it quite intriguing.
I'm loving the storyline and the characters are simply amazing.
And the fact that it takes place in a sort of sci-fi futuristic world completley grabs my attention and I find myself reading more and more.
I love your writing. You have an amazing gift :)
And I can't wait to read more of it!
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