I completley understand your feelings. I am 14 and my great - randma keeps doing strange things. She thinks I am herself as a child coming to visit her and doesn't recognize grandad or any of my dad's uncles and aunts. Dementia is a horrible disease
A well written but a vey sad poem. Makes the reader want to read more, and your style of writing is very original. Choosing to switch of your child's life support is indeed a really hard decision. I can give a good review - this is my humble opinion about your writing.
What a beautiful poem!!! It kind of reminds me of how many marriages are turning out to be these days - during dating times, the couple do anything to make each other happy and then they just fight and treat each other like rubbish.
The poem makes the reader want more, and in my case, I couldn't let go until I read the very last verse.
what a beautiful poem, sad as it is! I thouroughly enjoyed reading it! all the time i kept feeling the woman's emotions which were completley ignored until you wouldn't know she was there. I am only 13 , I can never give a good review, I can't explain myself well in English, since I am from another country, but I can tell you this - I have read with full enjoyment every bit of the poem.
like wow i know a friend of mine called Molly Elizabeth Heartly!!!!!! Born on December (not sure if the 12th), and has dirty blonde hair!!! coincedence or what?!
On the whole, I loved your story, I was greatly involved in it and I had to keep on reading until the very last word. Keep on writing!!!!
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