You have made my day! This is one of the funniest things (that are true) that I've read in months. Your descriptions are spot on and perfect in their singular truth. I thought my company restroom was the only one with limbo bars to separate the stalls! Keep the work up, I really like it!
I think this story could have potential, should you up the descriptions and maybe use some metaphors and similes. I like the subject, just dark enough to bring me to attention. Work on it and I'll review again.
~Weiss~
The Red King
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