This is the best poem I have ever read. I can't help myself but feel very connected to it. I love everything about it - the words, the pattern, the layout, the use of simple but so rightly used punctuation. The words you use paint such a picture in my head. They clearly portray what was going on at that time in your life. Thank you for being so open and real. The title is perfect, because sin is a beast.
Thank you
Weeza
What a beautifully, but sadly true poem. I love how you have presented it. It really spoke to me and made me think about any walls that I might have built because of someone (and even) elses behaviour. I could really see your passion through out the poem. The imagery was amazing. Great job!
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