I really like this poem. it reminds me a tad of myself. I like to do this too. I just sit with a notepad and a pen and jot down a bunch of random thoughts and put them in the form of a poem. Yours is just catchy and has a good rhythm. Your vocabulary is decent too, although you could improve it a little. There's always room for improvement. So keep up the good work. I like your poem and I hope you right more(even if they are a little random and weird).
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