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Rated: E | (4.5)
I think your poem is great! I love the theme of fire and how well you used it and made it fit with the rest of your poem!

The only way I could think of improving it would be to find a way of making your last two lines rhyme without changing the message. You could possibly write something like, " I'm left to wander, cold, alone, in an endless daze"
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