The was a great story. I have teenagers at home and can relate. Nice work. Go over this piece again to tidy up missed spell words and you're be good to go!
Great story! Good penmanship and all. You tell a story very well because it was easy to follow and it also felt as if I knew the characters you were writing about. Thank you very much for writing something worth the time and effort to read..
This was a very sad story and one in which I could relate to. I like the way you turned a sad story into an ironic one. This was a great read. Thanks..
Your rules for reviewing other author work was understandle and to the point. I love reading other authors contributions and it is nice to recieve other opinions about what I write. Thank you for writing this article clearly and to the point.
What an exciting story and very moving. This story felt real to me as If I knew your grandfather. Except for some errors in spelling this could be a book in the makings.I like to thank you for sharing one of your story aboutyour grandfather's deeds in Berlin.
Thank you for explaining the different processes of upgrading,permium,etc.. this was helpful in making a decision on what to do. This was informative and to the point. Thanks again!
This was a useful piece of information and I will be referring to this article from time to time to gain as much information and help as possible. Thanks for sharing.
There were some mistakes in this story, but most of it I wish were true. I can keep on dreaming about Mr. Ice cube but in real life I know for sure that this man is very marry and loves his wife and kids. Nice try though!
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