I really like the sentiment, of this art work. I would have given you a five
star rating, except for capitalization. I noticed all your I' s are missing
a capitol letter. But really you can work it out. The poem it self is beautiful.
And I encourage you to Write on!!!
Don't worry, I think that's what editors are for, at least I can dream any way.
Because, as the saying goes there are flaws in all of us. Mine is
definatly punctuation???
Thanks, for sharing your ideas.
Jan
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