I think this would make an amazing novel if and when completed. I really like the character of Clayton and how he is. I believe adding a prologue was a nice touch! All in all this is one of your best pieces.
I believe the story is exceptional and it has real life aplications. It is, in fact, a LOT like my life is! I was blown away by the word quality, and also the very fine detail put into the description of the people. All in all, a very fine story.
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