sentimental piece you have here...I too remember those day
however, keep your head held high .. and your heart in place
love conquer all..
if he's the one.. your words said it all...
heart-felt....
Some like it hot, some like it cold.. we the people alway see life at differerent ends
that might be your American dream, but we should always thrive for higher things in life
"none of us suddenly beomes something overnight .the preparation have been in the making for a liftetime.
thank for sharing..your insight...
Wow! this touch the core of my heart, sad Domestic violence is on the rise, more than usual since the recession.
however, it doesn't make it right for any man or women to put their hands on each other. vivid image in this piece
and the tone of the narrarator made the words jump off the page...their are high poem and low poems... you did it.
you kept me reading to the end.
It found this to be very creative, vivid images that keep a reader focus.It reminded me of a Device poetry which as we know always run away with the poet, however, we all need a little balance.
great effort on a worthy piece.
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