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Rated: E | (4.0)
This was very interesting and I am curious to know what happens next. I haven't read the first chapter, if you posted it, so I'm not entirely sure what is happening, but it seems very interesting. The descriptions are very good, particularly that of the vision that Addie has. However, I think that there could be more elaboration on certain aspects, such as the relationship between the villagers and the Keeper.
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