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Rated: E | (4.5)
Cocoa seemed to be a very happy puppy who would have done well in a forever home, but sadly you left Cocoa splashing in the pool forever or under the water as a final resting place. Your story reminds me of a time when my parents rescued a dog from out pool that had fallen in. I hope Cocoa is rescued. One way this can happen is for Cocoa to splash vigorously and for the people to hear this noise and rescue the dog. It still can be a temporary regret. I felt down and sad when the story ended with Cocoa still in the pool.

Thank you for writing and sharing your word art story about Cocoa and the crow

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Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
I wonder what Sam Adams did or didn't do that he should have that cause such a mob meeting to destroy Sam Adams. These cats took the law into their paws and became judge, jury, and executioners. I could see the fight between Sam Adams and the mob of cats, hear the meows and yelling, and figured either there were dozens of cats that made a quick decisive kill or the fighting was long and painful because cat bites do not quickly kill unless the right places are punctured. The execution could have been deliberately dragged out on purpose possibly. Your story got me to think.

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Review of Love Katuana  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (5.0)
I imagined your love wrapped around your gift while reading your poem. I pictured you intently watching her while your love rippled in her direction. The day I imagined was bright with golden rays shining through the bedroom window. You wrote and wonderful poetic tribute to your wife.

Thank you for writing and sharing your poetic word art about your wife with me and WdC members.


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Rated: E | (5.0)
I imagined you asleep, then waking to enjoy the morning as dreams faded. I felt happy as you seem to be about the beginning of a new adventure and the wonderful opportunities a new brings forth allowing growth and steps closer to being what you and I are supposed to be.

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Review of The New Woman  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (5.0)
It's sad when relationships are strained or broken because of loss of human misunderstandings. I felt sadness as I read this story. I would un bottle the joy I collected and share it with the world. I visualized the scene easily, heard the conversation, and didn't have any issues to distract me from reading your story.

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Rated: E | (5.0)
The way I read your poetic story seemed to have a jovial rhythm. Because of the wonderful outcome of your story, the rhythm for me fits very well. The antagonist lost the battle while you won even though there were many very, very tempting offerings. I'm glad you triumphed in this story.

Thank you for writing and sharing your story about temptation word art with me and WdC members

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Rated: ASR | (5.0)
I like lemonade but I will pass on this brew. This is a story that is believable to me because truth is stronger than fiction and it is very possible that something like or exactly like this happened somewhere. I followed the scene imagining the kids preparing the lemonade and setting up their stand. This brings back memories of me and my sister's produce stand. I can relate to having this kind of business.

Thank you for writing and sharing your lemonade stand word art with me and WdC members

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Review of Home Sweet Home  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (5.0)
While reading your story I felt as if I was receiving a hug from the people in your home, thank you. I could feel peace and joy through your words. This reminds me of my family. I imagined everyone enjoying each other's company and having fun together which is as a family should be each day.

Thank you for writing and sharing your word art about home and family with me and WdC members.

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Review of Memories  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (5.0)
I thought about memories moving like sand and made a mental picture of this. Sometimes as I recall memories do move like sand depending on the circumstances. Your words work well together because they flow smoothly and line up with the meaning of the words as I read and understood your poem.

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Review of Summer 's Palette  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (5.0)
I enjoyed imagining the beauty of summer through your descriptive words and enjoyable happy rhyme scheme. You showed a subtle contrast from spring hues to more brilliant hues of summer which made this poetic story more colorful. Peacefulness and the joy of warmer weather made me feel a longing for the growing season.

Thank you for writing and sharing your poetic word art with me and WdC members

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Review of A Failure So Rare  Open in new Window.
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Rated: ASR | (5.0)
You wrote a very sad and hopeful poem story that allowed me to easily visualize the scene. It felt kinda weird having sadness and hope mixed together. Years ago I flew many times and felt relieved when I safely landed at my destination. There is something about flying that is different from any other form of transportation. For this reason your poem made an impact.

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Rated: E | (5.0)
Your words showed me how you are tired yet you write and create a blog post. I can relate to the ideas run-in g through your head because my brain does not know when to stop and allow me to sleep. It feels as if you are passionate about writing and sharing your ideas. I wonder what else you felt during this activity in the early morning.

Thank you for writing and sharing you word art with me and WdC members about your early morning writing adventure word art story.

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Rated: E | (5.0)
If we are real and the emotion of love is within our hearts, then I believe love is real. The many kinds of love could fit into your poem, but it is the romantic love for a special someone that your story tells. I can see the questions overhead while the heart reaches out in wonder searching to determine if love actually is possible.

Thank you for writing and sharing your poetic love story with me and WdC members

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Review of A glimpse  Open in new Window.
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Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
You showed me a courtship with death and you in this poem dancing about, taunting, sneering and gesturing in ways that made the actions mimic the words. One thing you can do to help potential readers find your poetic story is add genres to your description list at the left. Dark would work well for example.

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Rated: ASR | (5.0)
You state well the condition of this world on earth. Sad but true things have changed but not for the better. This is evident in your poetic story. I feel your longing to be elsewhere. I also feel your hope for a better place. I imagined you pondering the possibilities for the future and saw disappointment creating on stage to dull the brightness of life.

Thank you for writing and sharing your word art about the changes and life with me and WdC members

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Rated: E | (5.0)
I like salt and vinegar crisps [potato chips] and tasted the flavor in my imagination as I read your words extolling the joy of devouring a bag of them. I can see you full of happiness munching away dipping your hand into the bag and pulling tasty crips out into the open then popping it into your mouth.

Thank you for writing and sharing your joy of eating salt and vinegar crisps word art with me and WdC members

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Rated: ASR | (5.0)
I read your poetic story from top to bottom first, then from bottom to top. The rhythms from the different directions were opposite which made the first top-to-bottom reading like simple disjointed statements compared to the bottom-to-top smooth rhythmic enjoyable reading. Your story is understandable from top to bottom, but it is easier to understand from bottom to top. This twist in your story was fun to experiment with and enjoy, thanks.

Thank you for writing and sharing your upside-down poetry story with me and WdC members

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Review of Work  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (5.0)
I wonder what work you are doing because of the way you show your relation to it and how it reacts to you. When I started reading your words I thought about writing. A tug-of-war between the ideas and you is what came to my mind and I imagined you grasping at any idea that might be close enough for you to capture.

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Review of Starlit Sky  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Young love found in wonder circumstances is easy to see in the scene. The rhythm for your poetic story as I read it is happy and energetic. Suddenly if it is omitted for me would make reading of the phrase rhythmically match the rest of your poetic rhythms. I could feel the thrill of being in love and see it continuing through out the barrage. When I got to the separation of the two people in love it felt like a kind of death because a life was gone and very much missed.

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Review of Aftershock  Open in new Window.
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Rated: 18+ | (4.5)
I understand there was an accident. The girl watched someone die a slow death, but I'm not sure she was involved in this also because of the hiking mentioned. After rereading this story I am sure she also was involved in the accident and the narrator was observing the scene and holding the girl and comforting her.

Your story is believable. I was able to imagine the scene.

{had seen} is past tense. Your poetic story using this shows the past. If this is what you mean it's ok, but showing this as it is happening is more effective because it brings the reader into the story in the present and it is a stronger delivery. Also is past tense and sometimes writers over use this word.

Thank you for writing and sharing your word art about the accident with me and WdC members.


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Review of My Missing Friend  Open in new Window.
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Rated: ASR | (5.0)
Your story of a special friendship is clear and easy to understand. The phrases are smooth and pleasant to read. I visualized the events and in my imagination everything is vivid and colorful.

Thank you for writing and sharing your word art about this special friendship with me and WdC members

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Review of Christmas First  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (5.0)
The ending of your story was funny. I appreciate the laugh, thank you. While reading your Christmas story I felt like you were sitting across from me sharing your story. You clearly explained your opinions about celebrating Christmas.

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Review of Sun Worshippers  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (5.0)
The dance is easy to imagine. I could feel the life and warmth of the day as it progressed. The life giving nature and care from God is uplifting to my heart and soul. I felt as if you were reading your poem to me.

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Review of Taste  Open in new Window.
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Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
Testing the blood reminds me of vampires, but considering the description of a lost love I also thought about the taste of everything experienced in the love between people. The scenes of various experiences were easy to imagine but the one about killing friends was sad and discomforting yet I suppose the killing could refer to the death of friendships rather than actual death.

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Rated: E | (5.0)
Your poetic story showed humanity clearly and the scene in my imagination touched my heart. It is sad because people are so quick to judge but hopefully people will learn to con sider the human condition and have mercy and understanding. I could feel the pain of your words as well as hope for a better future.

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