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Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
Broken does not mean useless as your story aptly pointed out to the readers. Your characters are easy to get to know and likable. The scenes kept me focused on your story. The characters gave me insight into a situation that hopefully many people will experience sometime throughout their lives. I could touch the broken bridge and feel its strength then I felt it weaken and eventually go away, but it is possible that what is salvageable of the bridge might be used for a new project. I liked that the bridge was painted so it would still be available for people to look at and admire. The happy ending is very nice and uplifting.

A description of the painting compared to the details of the bridge would be intriguing. I wonder what shades of blue was used and how the light and shadows effected the image of the bridge.

There was nothing to distract me and take me out of your story.

I hope you will expand this story or perhaps create one based on the bridge and characters.

Your delivery of this story is a good match for the scene and characters.

Thank you for writing and sharing your word art with me and WdC members.

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Review of Courier's Panic  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (4.5)
I enjoyed your story because having the animals act as people made imagining the events interesting. I am an animal lover and this also is a reason for reading and enjoying your story. You clearly showed me the characters and scenes, and the plot was believable. I wonder what the next delivery adventure will be. I would like to know more about the characters and their histories.

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Review of "What I Hear"  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (5.0)
The ominous death, hate, and war rages in your poetic story and sends shivers down my spine. The sounds of these things reverberated in my imagination as I read your words. The conflict us evident and quietly standing by I feel the glimmer of hope. I enjoy music also and am eclectic but have a few limits for certain genres, so can understand where this poetic story came from.

Thank you for writing and sharing your word art with me and WdC members

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Review of The Breakup  Open in new Window.
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Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
I pictured the scene easily and heard the noises of the breakup as I followed the words in your poetic story. It was emotionally vivid and I felt like there was respect for the person going through the breakup because the witness stayed still and quiet. The rhythm of your poem was a god match for the events you described.

Thank you for writing and sharing your word art with me and WdC members

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Review of Heroes  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Your poem says it all and this touched my heart. My father served in Italy during WW2 and he came home which is why I'm doing this review. Your poem is easy to read and understand. It is clear and allows the reader to imagine scenes in detail. I could feel the honor and pride and grief while reading this story.

Thank you for writing and sharing your word art with me and WdC members

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Rated: E | N/A (Review only item.)
I was able to picture in my mind a writer pushing through formable black space as the struggle for the right words and formation of a story was created with great effort. I could feel through your words the determination of this writer to press on and not give in to defeat but reach farther and find victory.

Thank you for writing and sharing your word art about the challenges of conquering the cross timbers as related to challenges of writing a story with me and WdC members

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Review of Curious George  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (5.0)
I could envision a monkey scarring around exploring containers and closets, as well as looking into the refrigerator and kitchen cabinets. The excitement of the hunt also was easy to experience through your words. I wonder if Curious George has nine lives or more and if George found treasure.

Thank you for writing and sharing your word art about Curious George with me and WdC members

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Rated: E | (5.0)
I could imagine someone dressed inna flowing brightly colored gown moving gracefully and full of life dancing with someone in a splendid suit who is strong and romantic. The music played in my head as they danced as one and kept the beat perfectly.

Thank you for writing and sharing your poetry of the dance and that special beautiful dancer and her partner word art with me and WdC members

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Review of As He Walked Away  Open in new Window.
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Rated: ASR | (5.0)
I could see vividly their parting and heard in my mind their conversation. It seemed to be desperation mixed with hope. Your story is easy to read and understand. The characters are realistic. The scene is believable.

Thank you for writing this parting scene and sharing your word art with me and WdC members

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Review of Decisions  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (5.0)
I didn't expect your ending which was a nice surprise. I could imagine father and son conversing and then heading off to the spot where the boy found the pink-blue object. I wonder if the mother looked different enough for her husband to wonder about her or if she was able to change enough to seem like everyone else. I believe you could expand this story and hope sometime you will add to it.

Thank you for writing and sharing your word art with me and WdC members.

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Rated: E | (5.0)
I believe you are a deep thinker based on your poetic story. I know thornless roses do not have a scent according to my research. To answer your question, there are always opposites. When I see light there is also dark for example. ZGood and at times bad, etc. You have me considering the rose and thorns now and exploring the possibilities.

Thank you for writing and sharing your word art with me and WdC members.

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Rated: E | (5.0)
You wrote an uplifting poem that caused my heart to feel joy and happiness as I followed your poetic story. I felt light and as if I were sailing on a cloud looking down at earth and waiting to finish my journey upwards. I do my best to accomplish these things also and understand your intentions.

Thank you for writing your poem and sharing your heavenly word art with me and WdC members

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Review of Guidance  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Oh what a sneaky plan of self-preservation, it's wonderful. As I read your story I could imagine them arguing about how to get to their destination on time. Their interactions kept me interested in reading as I wondered what would happen next.

Thank you for writing and sharing your word art about directions with me and WdC members

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Review of ENGLISH POETRY  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Your words show incredible faith and thrust, a zest and appreciation for life, and gratitude for each day. A lightness came over me as I read your words. Your poems are clear and easy to understand.

Thank you for writing and sharing your poetic word art with me and WdC members.

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Review of Illusions  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Your words show the mistakes humans make and when they forget history is written by the victors more mistakes are made. I'm with you about the high cost of greed which you illustrate well in this poem. For the of money is the root of all evil.
You bravely wrote about truths of the human condition.

Thank you for writing and sharing your word art with me and WdCm members

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Rated: ASR | (5.0)
I can easily relate to taking a long time to get to sleep because eyes don't close but for me it's my brain won't shut up and stop working on ideas. Your poem expressed the challenges of being retired in an amusing way, thanks.

Thank you for writing and sharing your word art about being retired and maybe tired with me and WdC members

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Rated: ASR | (5.0)
WOW! What a spiritually uplifting story. My heart felt glad for the achievements of the people in your story. It is wonderful when God has a plan and the person has a strong faith. You clearly and concisely presented wonderful people, a great lifestyle, and a glorious outcome.

Thank you for writing and sharing your word art with me and WdC members

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Rated: E | (5.0)
I enjoyed this wordy adventure with you because the words beaconed me to keep reading and imagining them dancing about creating phrases, sentences, and word pictures of all sorts.

Thank you for writing and sharing you love of words and writing with me and WdC members

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Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
This story is a nice twist because it reminds me of games and challenges shown on TV. Gala is an interesting character because s/he seems to have a huge sense of adventure and curiosity. Boredom doesn't fit into my lifestyle so I have not exactly understood how boredom works.

Thank you for writing and sharing your alien word art with me and WdC members

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Rated: E | (5.0)
I could feel the stress of the job and see the detective struggling to deal with the crimes to be solved as muscles were tense and nerves jangled. Later at the Front Porch, I imagined the stress slipping away as nerves rested and muscles relaxed. The characters and scenes are realistic and the story is plausible.

Thank you for writing and sharing your detective word art with me and WdC members

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Rated: E | (5.0)
You showed vividly who and how your family connections go beyond the grave. I'm glad your belief, faith, and family ties are strong.

These genres could help potential readers find your word art: emotional, experience, family, Genealogy, inspirational, personal, relationship, and spiritual.

Thank you for writing and sharing your family ties word art with me and WdC members

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Review of Comedy With Me  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (5.0)
I enjoyed the laughter. Jokes can be uplifting and fun to read. It's been a while since I spent time reading jokes. Many thanks for posting them. Laughter is good medicine and you saved me from spending money at the doctor's office.

Thank you for writing and sharing your word art jokes with me and WdC members

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Review of In Mongolia  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (5.0)
The picture is colorful and shows merriment. I can imagine this laughter being contagious and rippling throughout the region causing other beings to laugh and enjoy life. In my mind, I can hear laughter and see a crowd of people enjoying a gathering. This story put a smile on my face. Many thanks for this smile.

Thank you for writing and sharing your laughter word art with me and WdC members

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Review of Random stuff  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (5.0)
I know I dream, but when I fully wake I do not remember them. I imagined someone asleep and dreaming while reading your story. It felt as if I were part of the dream. You created a story that mimics a dream state that is realistic.

Thank you for writing and sharing your dream story word art with me and WdC members

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Rated: E | (5.0)
Thank you for taking me with you on your trip. I felt like I got to know everyone. Certainly, Buddy added interest to this adventure. I have dogs and enjoy spending time with them, so Buddy fits right in and I imagined giving him pettings and watching him look around.

Thank you for writing and sharing your trip word art with me and WdC members

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