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Rated: E | (5.0)
These sentences remind me of cheerleading for something special. At least this is the way I responded as I read your words. The other thought and image that came to my mind was someone speaking to a huge crowd and everyone in one accord cheering for these ideas. Also, I felt excitement because of the ideas that would be woven into a story. This is a wonderful start to a great adventure with words. Consider letting your imagination be completely free to create. Write whatever comes to your mind and [definitely keep the editor far away from your creative process.] After you've written the story and are finished this is when the editor can make necessary changes.

Thank you for writing and sharing the beginning of an adventure with words for a great story with me and WdC members

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Rated: E | (5.0)
At the beginning of your poetic story, I envisioned a person sleeping and dreaming, gentle dreams, colorful scenes, and relaxation of the body and the mind. A scene of Ireland and gold cascading throughout the world while people are free and enjoying life came to me, then an overhead view of Ireland as a heartbeat for this home the longing for Ireland.

Thank you for writing and sharing your word art about Ireland and dreams with me and WdC members

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Rated: E | (5.0)
Your article clearly explained muscle pain, the causes, treatments, and optional activities and treatments as well as advising seeing professional help.

Dainely™ Smart Cupping Massager

I'm not familiar with this technique. I know about suction but this is as far as my knowledge goes. Adding a link or content about this technique would help readers understand about this procedure.


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Review of Within The Sky  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (5.0)
As I took in your words I felt the wonder of life and the awesomeness of a being beyond human comprehension. Visually I imagined the vast universe going far beyond what the human eye could see even going from bright lights into deep darkness. The idea of floating came to my mind and the hint of this sensation also visited my imagination. The wonder and trepidation mixed and churned within. Peace emerged into my consciousness as I considered eternal life beyond earth.

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Your page is easy to navigate, easy to read, and has eye appeal. This concept is clutter-free and makes finding information easy for visitors. The drop-down function allows the reader to focus on the needed information without other distractions. The colors chosen are inviting and do not scream nor are they too faint.

Thank you for writing and creating this page and sharing your word art with me and WdC members

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Rated: E | (5.0)
I have not heard of Zentangle until I read about your journey in creating art. Years ago I dabbled with oils, watercolor, pens, pencils, and other art mediums. I should get into artistic creation again. You explained very well about your introduction and experiences with this art form. I hope you continue your journey and have loads of fun.

Thank you for writing and sharing your art journey word art with me and WdC members

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Review of Daily Goals  Open in new Window.
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Rated: 18+ | (5.0)
Setting goals regularly is a good idea that I've accomplished often. Whatever I do not get finished I move over to the next day. for these reasons, I can relate to this story. I like the three goals idea because they are not overwhelming and most often can be met. The writing style is friendly and personal which kept me interested in reading.

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Review of Hero  Open in new Window.
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You introduced me to Dagin Bar who I got to know through your words. He seems to be small yet mighty and someone to not trifle with meaning it's better to be his friend rather than his enemy. It was sad to learn his friends were gone and entombed. Loneliness was evoked through those words and I felt like it would be nice for him to have a friend.

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Review of Father's Love  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Reading you poetic words showed me the pain of a daughter as witnessed by her father who might have acted to resolve a particularly difficult situation. This could result in self-destruction. The scene is emotional and I visualized two characters In a serious struggle with traumatic events.

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Review of Chinese Couplets  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (5.0)
I enjoyed reading the simple, clear, and direct statements of your poem. The words gave me peace because of the protectiveness of banishing demons. The iddea of being prosperous gives me hope. The rhythm is smooth according to the way I read this poem.

Thank you for writing and sharing your poetry word art with me and WdC members

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Review of Nothing  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Depending on how a person reads your words different emotions are evoked. I could clearly see the scenes and throughout this story, I held onto hope, but looming large was the idea of "divided we fall" and this ate away at me in the background as your words penetrated my mind. God knows the end from the beginning. We humans have free will.

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Review of WOMEN'S ANTHEM  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Your lyrics are a nice devotion to women. The story is clear and emotions express feelings and show strength. I imagined a huge march of different nations of women together in one accord. Sharing the joy of being and doing. This story in poetry form has a nice rhythm that kept me reading.

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Review of Rear View  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (5.0)
I could see eyes in the rearview mirror while reading your poetic story about the adrenaline rush of driving down a road. I could imagine the excitement and thrill of the activity while the feeling of dread loomed in the near background.

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Review of my dearest  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Life is precious. I'm glad you are here to write this wonderful tribute to your dearest. You have the memories of the special time you and your dearest were together and because you live and share your feelings and experiences you and your dearest are living together. Your poem is clear and expresses your love for your dearest very well. I felt like I got to know you and your dearest.

Thank you for writing and sharing your word art about you and your dearest with me and WdC members

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Review of for the rain  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (5.0)
I'm grateful to God when He sends rain especially when it is very much needed. I could see the drops and hear the pitter-patter as I read your words.

To help potential readers find your poem you could add genres. Nature, Environment, Inspirational, or possibly Home/Garden.

Thank you for writing and sharing your raindrop poetry word art with me and WdC members.

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Review of Family Secrets  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (5.0)
It's interesting what a DNA test will reveal about someone's ancestry. I was very easily able to follow the events of your story because I'm familiar with LDS and researching family history.

Thank you for writing and sharing your word art about Sam's ancestry with me and WdC members.

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Review of Family Secrets  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (5.0)
It's interesting what a DNA test will reveal about someone's ancestry. I was very easily able to follow the events of your story because I'm familiar with LDS and researching family history.

Thank you for writing and sharing your word art about Sam's ancestry with me and WdC members.

al ,which h the comma needs to be beside the L.


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Review of Honey, Honey  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (5.0)
The intensity of the rhythm of your poem according to how I read it and the choice of your words clearly showed me the everlasting love you have for the special person in your life. I could picture you taking great care of your wife.

Thank you for writing and sharing your love story word art with me and WdC members

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Rated: E | (5.0)
I had to smile at the end of your story. Your characters are believable and act realistic. The scenes are easy to understand and imagine.

Thank you for writing and sharing your word art about a life-changing event for Ethan and the woman who became his wife with me and WdC members.

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Rated: E | (5.0)
You wrote a strong and true statement in your Japanese Tanka poem. I believe you expressed the human condition and the fate of life on this only place humans live, Planet Earth. I don't need to imagine because I've witnessed the unrest but my mind still pictured a battle all over earth as I read your words.

Thank you for writing and sharing your Japanese Tanka word art with me and WdC members

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Review of Haiku [180.49]  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (4.5)
The pink flowers against the blue sky are calming and I understand why dinner will be served late. The words you chose for your Haiku poem make me feel like joining the person looking at the flowers.

I seem to remember Haihu has 5 lines, 7 lines, and 5 lines.

Thank you for writing and sharing your Haiku word art with me and WdC members

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Review of Malice Intended  Open in new Window.
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Rated: ASR | (5.0)
The innocent character got busted because of carelessness, well, well, well. The clues and characters kept me interested in reading your story. I suspected the person reading the newspaper might be involved but wasn't absolutely certain. Just before a tasty snack and leaving the place it seemed there was no reason for intrusion, but of course this enjoyable time had to be interrupted. The innocence of the story had me wondering where it was going to go until the end.

Thank you for writing and sharing your mystery spy word art with me and WdC members.

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Review of Hairpin Trigger  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (5.0)
I was easily able to imagine a sniper looking through the scope and exhaling as he placed his finger against the trigger. He squeezes and boom a projectile flies racing toward the target. The target falls, and life is gone. The sniper reloads. Your story evoked these images and thoughts because of the order and choice of your words.

Thank you for writing and sharing your war word art with me and WdC members

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Review of Frying Bacon  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Piglets in the kitchen was an interesting image in my mind as I read your story. Bacon is ok, but I am not a gotta-have-it kind of bacon eater. I might enjoy spending time with the piglets better. You pose a good question about exactly who is cooking the bacon.

Thank you for writing and sharing your bacon word art with me and WdC members

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Review of No Title Yet  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Reading your no-title story shows me the despair and discouragement looming and clinking at times, and invading the depths of the mind trying to drag deeper the thought of hope so that hope no longer lives. But after the struggles, Hops is stronger, its life force continues, and the future is possible in a good way. I hope things are better.

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