Wordy indeed!
But also very well written.
There is nothing I would change, nothing I would point out as lesser than the rest.
All in all I think this is written brilliantly.
The characters, as representatives of their viewpoints, work very well.
The eventual realisation that the main character makes leans a bit towards the obvious in a way that reminds me of romanticism. My personal dislike for romanticism set aside, this was a great read.
As I said, there is nothing I would change and nothing I can point out as poor. I have given this the highest rating possible on this site, and think it is well deserved.
All in all this is a very good story.
The gradual shift from vague and unclear to a dawning revelation and explanation was very well handled.
The important points are shown in pieces, allowing the reader to put them all together on their own, which is traditionally a mark of a great writer. This impressed me greatly.
I like this, the mood and flow of the piece is great.
This really strikes a nerve in me, and reverberate with emotion that echo thoughts of my own.
Well done.
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