Wow. This is extraordinary. You have a wonderful writing style, and the plot line was wonderful. I almost thought that Sirius made up the whole meeting, to trick Snape into finding out that Lupin was a werewolf, but I couldn't think of him trying to hurt Lupin.
It's really good! There is a lot of detail, and I enjoyed reading this very much. I will be sure to look into your other stories. I'd like to see a sequel, if you have it in you to write one.I know I'd probably be much too lazy to. Keep up the good work!
It's really well-written, in my opinion, but I'm just a little bit confused about the ending sentence. Does it mean that they will start over, or what? Other than that little inconvenience, It's wonderful. I would like to see a small sequel to it, to find out why he left. Keep writing!
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