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Review of Vardenfall  Open in new Window.
Review by Victor Gamon Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | (5.0)
I loved your story.
Your setting is so emotional, a son and his mother tramped in a bunker, the maze of tunnels, the artificial playground that holds its own secrets.

Any ways, I want to praise the fine work you have made. The beginning dint really interest me, but i am glad I kept reading. I just wish I was a better critic so I could write you a thorough review.

The solitude, the hopelessness, the secrets, the unknown future. Your story moved me. I haven't given any one a rating of 5, but I think you deserve it.
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Review of Golden Coin  Open in new Window.
Review by Victor Gamon Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | (4.0)
Although I like your poem, I am not sure if you are trying to say that you must also hate something in order to love it or that you must have ability to actually feel the extremes of one in order to have the other. I would agree only with the later.

-Victor Gamon
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