That is an amazing story i love mythology one of my favcourite book series is the narnian chronicles. The way you wright is sublime! I just have one queary, is branbon gay. The way the story is set out to me he sounds he is gay. So if you take afense, but all i really have to say is keep writing and enjoy.
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