I loved this, I absolutely loved this. If a man had written this for me, I would never leave him. It was short and sweet, this is one that will stay in my mind for as long as it can. You really put your emotions through the poem, to the reader. I enjoyed the use of repetition, I feel as though it really put emphasis on what you were trying to show through the poetry.
This poem was incredibly sad, but at the same time it was so beautiful, I don't know how you pulled it off. It made me really feel how she felt, think what she thought. I felt dead inside. I wanted to cry my heart out. It captured me. I don't know what I would do in that same situation, how I would make it through the day. I especially like the last line, with the poppy. Bringing in something as beautiful as a flower, which usually makes people happy, to a poem that is so depressing, it was brilliant.
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