Venomous Candy's (venomouscandy) Reviews

Venomous Candy

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#3527562

Review of Worthwhile

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Rated: E

| (5.0)

nice poem

idea is very good feel nostalgic

and when i read these words

While looking back try to smile
Wasn't it all worthwhile
Wasn't it all worthwhile

i also smile and think about my past same feelings come to mind
as i remember my past i also try to smile

keep on writing

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#3522237

Review of The King's Sons

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Rated: E

| (3.0)

theme of this poem is good and new
but

i think if you write this poem in prose
it will be more effective and power full
be cause its still look like story more then poem

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#3520291

Review of The Key

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Rated: E

| (5.0)

wow
what a poem. oh its beautiful
i cant explain it in word
there is every element in it to grab the reader till end
when i start reading this poem i wonder what kind of keys and then i though ofcourse treasure keys
so i go further and when master give key to man
i thought now man will be richest because he got big treasure

but i was wrong
this was not the treasure of this world
the treasure was surely very great
an i feel bad to not think so deeply

its really a great job

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#3503335

Review of My Mind's Recess

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Rated: E

| (4.5)

what a poem

i have no word but i am trying

i think its about me
or every one in this world
no??

best part of the poem is

Deep within the recess of my mind
Dwell the recollections of times gone by
At some I laugh, at others I cry
Deep within the recess of my mind

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#3496541

Review of Whim of Wind

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Rated: E

| (3.5)

nice poem

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#3468136

Review of Let's get to know each other better

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Rated: E

| (5.0)

nice survey but i wanna know what you do after knowing me
if you reply i will be satisfy

i dont think that any one can know other

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#3468084

Review of Sad Goodbye

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Rated: E

| (4.0)

sad good bye

i read it and just feel that you express my own feelings
poem descend deep in my heart with full of emotions

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#3467518

Review of Noticing Newbies

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Rated: 13+

| (5.0)

hello

i m Venomous Candy live in Pakistan
i write much in my native language Urdu but one day an idea struck in
and i wrote "What you do"

of course i like it but need opinion of others
be cause human being can learn more by criticisem of others

good wishes for all new writers