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Review of Steps  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (3.5)
This poem is really kind of kool. I think that for some reason the first line did not work for me and it kind of made me shake my head and I read it one more time, really kind of kool, is all I can say, Write On! VaV-VOOM!
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Review of Wicked Walk  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (4.0)
Wow, that is powerful. Shiva: The god of destruction and regeneration in the Hindu sacred triad.
I Like this powerful poem, and I except it on behalf of someone who has had a rainy day. Nice job! Write On! VaV-VOOM!
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Review by VaV-VOOM! Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | (4.0)
Wow! I must say i can feel for you or should i say it?
I think this is a powerful poem just plain right out powerful. It makes for a real good read, almost scary. It left me with the feeling and the thought that This person or thing really means it. Even kind of, well, low down. I like it. Write On! VaV-VOOM!

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Review of Eyes  Open in new Window.
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Rated: 18+ | (3.5)
This is a nice poem; I think the writer has a good minds eye of what it was they wanted to say. I do not know that I (if I were the writer) would not try to drop a word or maybe two here and there, though. It just seems to be a little off with to many extra small words. I feel that sometime those little words can ki
ll you. All in all a nice poem. Write On! VaV-VOOM!

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Review by VaV-VOOM! Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | (3.0)
Kool, i like it. With a little punctuation who knows what it could be? Fun read, Write On! VaV-VOOM!
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