Wow. This poem has truth in it, if everything is different then in fact everything is the same. What I like most about this piece is the way the rythym and the words connect so easily. Great job, I look forward to reading more.
Sincerely, Billyray Jones
Wow. I honestly hope that this isn't written from a personal experience.
This poem has alot of emotional and is very well structured.
Overall I believe that if you aplly yourself to other pieces like you have in this one, you will have more potential and inspiration.
Billyray Jones
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