I adored your poem. It reminded me of a relationship I had with someone. Once it's ended, question are truth come up. Was it real if it ended this badly? I think you really grasped the pain of ending a relationship with someone who was once your world. Your poem really got to me. I really loved it.
There was something fascinating about this poem. It just captured me. There was one line that stood out to me, "Beauty has turned ugly." I guess it stood out because it's something that happens to everything as time passes. As things change day by day everything changes, we grow old, we lose our youth, everything that makes everyday people think we look so beautiful. I don't know if what I'm saying makes sense, but just know that I did love this poem. Great job!
I really connected to this poem. I know what it's like to want someone that you can't have anymore. Missed chances. Mine have sadly caused bitterness on my end, but it's good that you don't sound bitter to her. Lost loves can hurt the most, but I guess that's why we write about them. Keep up with the great writing.
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