I just started looking at this story and it's already got me wanting more. I love this stories massive amount of choices and freedom, and the work on the descriptions is amazing. This is very well described and written, and I hope to see more great work.
After looking at more of this story, I decided to bring my 3.5 up to 4 stars. This story is simply awesome, but I do kind of wish we could choose the starting weights of the characters. Other then that, I really enjoy this story and it's possibilities.
Wow, holy crap. This by far is the largest interactive I've ever seen, Over 6000 addictions and possibly still going. This story is simply massive and full of choices. I don't know how it got so big, but it's still amazing how large and complete this story is.
I simply love WG/slob stories involving sonic characters, and how this interactive story offers the reader full control of how the story plays out. Your story is loaded with so much choice and options that it offers tons of creative freedom, and the structure is pretty good too.
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