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Review of Ode to the sun  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (5.0)
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My Thoughts:
It is a beautifully written poem. Nice Flow & Subject as we always hope for A sunny day tomorrow

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Review of She has a Name  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (5.0)
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My Thoughts:

A very unique and interesting poem. I loved it and hope 'She' finds her true self again.

My Suggestions:

None, well written and no errors :)

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Review of A Christmas Poem  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (5.0)
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My Thoughts:
I love this poem. Not only well written but just brings a smile to my face for the Holidays that are coming.

My Suggestions:
None. No mistakes found and well written.

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Review of Every Love.  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (5.0)
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My Thoughts:

I loved this poem. Well written and does make one think about things.

My Suggestions:

None

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Rated: E | (5.0)
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My Thoughts:

A cute and well-written. Does make me wonder which I would be lol.


My Suggestions:

None from me.

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Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
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My Thoughts:

A fascinating and well-written story. I enjoyed each line to the end; your opening paragraph had a strong hook to captivate the reader.

My Suggestions:

No Suggestions as it is an amazing story.

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Rated: E | N/A (Review only item.)
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My Thoughts:

This is a beautifully written story. I loved reading every line not wanting it to end. Please keep writing more like this.

My Suggestions:

No suggestions needed

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Rated: E | (5.0)
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My Thoughts:

Great poem about the NFL and the season starts this coming Thursday, 05 September, 2024

My Suggestions:

No Suggestions as it was written excellently

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Review of Right Thirst  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (5.0)
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My Thoughts:

This is a great story that reminds us to move past our fears we must push past it like the deer did. It is hard to overcome fears at times but with confidence & strength in our willpower, it can be done.

My Favorite Part:

Everything did love the ending thinking the deer was gone but he succeeded!

My Suggestions:

None! This was written excellently.

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Rated: E | (5.0)
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My Thoughts:

I love this story as our siblings are true friends. You have a great family for sure.

My Favorite Part:

Everything. From the start, I was hooked and would love to read more.

My Suggestions:

I don't have any suggestions, it is very well written.

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Review of Sorrow  Open in new Window.
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Rated: ASR | (4.5)
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My Thoughts:
This is a very well written story and enjoyed it. You flow through the story was firm and the energy of your writing can be felt

My Suggestions:
There was just one minor typo at the start of the 4th Paragraph you called Truman, "Truaman." otherwise, well done.

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Review by The King Pen Author IconMail Icon
Rated: ASR | (1.0)
I think most of us love the Beach Boys but please write about that not sharing links.


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Review of Positive Thinking  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (5.0)
This is a great poem and I love how positive it is. It is very well written with no problems seen.

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Review by The King Pen Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | (5.0)
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I hope you are doing well. It is a very nice and interesting poem. I did not spot any issues and would love to read more.

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Review by The King Pen Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | (3.5)
Hi,

Interesting poem, love it but needs some work as shown below. Pay attention to your punctuation as well. You have a promising career ahead of you. I would suggest downloading Grammarly to help with your writing.

The Pen Mage

Remove the comma after Love me to read Love me or hate me 1st line

I am who I am there's no changing who I am. Love Me, or hate me I am not perfect but true. Love Me or hate me my imperfections are ~Insert Period

Are sharper than (If the Are is a continuation of the are ending the first paragraph then join the two lines as the use of two are"s is redundant.)
Are sharper than a needle, brighter than botax. Love Me or hate me I will stand tall like a statue and be strong like concrete. Love Me or

Hate me this is me and i'm not ashamed (Bring this sentence up to align up with the or used to end above)


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Review by The King Pen Author IconMail Icon
Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
Awesome work. Enjoyed reading this and no mistakes that I could find. Would love to read more.


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Review of The Box of Toys  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Awesome Poem! Toy Story Vibe for sure and well written. Each sentence flowed to the other.

Keep up the great work!!


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Review of The Markets  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Very interesting poem. I have not seen one before about the stock market but well written and I enjoyed reading your work.


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Review of The New Year  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Love this poem! Not only well written but deep in thought. Very well done!
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Rated: E | (5.0)
A very interesting story. Very well written but the last block you should break it into paragraphs, IMHO.


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Review of Hello Old Friend  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Great Poem and well written and I can relate to this as well.


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