The protagonist immediately pulled me in and I wanted to find out more about him and what would happen. The first chapter sucked me in with hints of a scar and left me wondering how he got it. You are compelled to read on to find out how he got this scar and where this journey to a new land would take him. Good or bad I feel like I have to take this journey with him.
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