Wow! You are a really great author! Your descriptive language was perfectly ballanced with the story, and there wasn't a part that i wasn't confused at, or couldn't see the picture in my mind! Keep up the good work!
Great job! This sort of reminds me of the day that my heart and soul was crushed into a milllion pieces when i broke up with my first boyfriend after he kissed me for the first time, except the poem would probably be from his point of view :) Keep up the great work!
Great story, and I like the moral! I am REALLY not trying to be rude, but maybe try to put some quotation marks in there. It might just be because you are not used to the site yet, I should know because I am new too, and I STILL haven't entirely figured out how to write on here, so but I am SUPER SORRY if it sounded offensive. :( Once again, Great Story!
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