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Rated: 18+ | (4.5)
This is amazing. Though, it could do a little more with the paragraphing. It was a bit hard to read because the paragraphs were so poorly spaced. But, it was good, all in all. You should keep writing, though, you are a very, very, very amazing writer, and I suppose many would look up to you.
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