Your stories are so vivid, so full of emotion and details. I'm a straight male and you make me desire to be a lesbian if only a lust like this can be satisfied. The passion exhibited, the desire fulfilled and the lust quenched, if only for a time make me admire how much is given by one for the other. I thoroughly enjoyed reading your stories...all of them and look forward to more.
A wonderfully written story that successfully conveys the sexual lust felt as the two lovers engage one another. This raw story is written in a way to transport the reader into the room, a voyeur if only in their mind.
The story was great, and yet I felt as if there could yet be a different ending...a twist that revealed a memory loss, and a wife wanting to know if her husband still loved her even though he'd become a different person because of a tragic accident.
That's my mind working in overdrive though.
The story brought back my own memories of forbidden loves found and then ended before they got started; of feelings for another when my own heart is pledged to my wife.
The truth of this story rings strong and clear to those of us who have commitments that can't and shouldn't be broken.
Sometimes I got lost in the dialog, having to scroll back up to see who was saying which words. I do this myself and try to occasionally note the talker.
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