Wow! The very first paragraph grabbed my attention and held it hostage. Beautifully written and a great example to aspiring writers, the plot is very interesting and thickens with each minute.
This is the beginning of, what I believe, to be a great tale.
A charming story describing ones life and the choices to make in it, no matter the situation. The vast range of descriptive terms paints a (motion-)picture in the readers mind. Simply hypnotizing. The emotional challenges and conflicts are exciting and unpredictable and the clash between reality and a never-ending dream-world is the icing on the cake.
I don't pretend to know what someone would do when the time to choose between two life-altering paths arises, but it's always a thrill to see the outcome.
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