I really enjoyed reading your story. It had a strong, romantic feel to it even though the ending was bittersweet. You did a good job conveying Jessen's and Lee's love for each other and also Jessen's heartbreak at his upcoming wedding. I did end up liking her character more than his though, mostly because he seemed a little too accepting of his arranged marriage to a princess. Overall I thought you did a great job! :)
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