I really liked this .Its as though you and your other; whether together in the same place or apart, together the two of you are forever. Like the origin of your love "Petra" the true stone foundation. I am touched as well as reminded of my greatest friend and love thank you!
I know how it feals to be in a hole with no way out.You may some times feel you light geting dimmer but through your writing your light will never dim but only shine brighter
I reread this several times after we talked and thought about it .Though you know I am a little biased; however I found it to be Poignant and insightful, dark throughout and freeing at the realization of the sender. There is great beauty in true talent and It is obvious that there is beauty within the darkness of this poem. It truly is very good.
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