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Rated: 18+ | (3.5)
This work needs to be made into a full blown novel. The Author was cutting too much backstory out. She knows her stuff and that is very evident. The writing while very fine, was choppy in places. This writer can do so much more with the story. Characters were well developed and she had me hooked early. Keep at it!
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