waring=wearing, it was over 300 years old=unlikley, nearves=nerves, dues= (i beleive you meant) does, dawn=(once again i beleive you meant) down, carfule= careful, agoe= ago, chang= changed, I guess but it is different much different (should have been a comma between different and much), Hay= hey (spelled it right just used the wrong one), D date= D's date, D blush= D blushed, geting=getting, once again wearing, second sentence in paragraph to runs on, down, i walked to my car, it was a white catalack i called daregist, didn't, just.
sorry but you should have checked it to look for the above mistakes :(
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