Your poem screams for democracy in the form it was meant to be when Thomas Jefferson used it. Big business matters more than human lives. Our government feeds us their lingo to keep us afraid and relying on them. All the while they take freedoms away from us. Bravo!
Wonderful.Today so many people go about life without actually living it. Your poem speaks of those who choose do so. Their lives revolve around some crummy mindless job that doesn't require anything except a robotic soul.Our spirits get lost in those types of jobs.
You have shared how cleansing a walk in the rain can be. When I was younger I loved to stay out in the rain. Your poem reminded me of all those happy times.
You give a bird's eye view of how different an autisic child is like from a very early age. Your story was well written and educational. Stay strong and keep writing.
You were very descriptive about what the city was like, but fell short in purveying the depth of grief the couple felt over lossing their pet. I have lost a dear pet and my grief was as strong as if it were a family member. You do have a stong sense of explaining the stories surroundings. As I read your descriptions I could picture them in my mind. Your writing gives me the feeling you are very intelligent.
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