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Review by Nora Wilde Author IconMail Icon
Rated: 13+ | (4.5)
Your poem screams for democracy in the form it was meant to be when Thomas Jefferson used it. Big business matters more than human lives. Our government feeds us their lingo to keep us afraid and relying on them. All the while they take freedoms away from us. Bravo!
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Review by Nora Wilde Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | (4.0)
Nice poem about the pain one can feel long after the original misdeed was done.
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Review by Nora Wilde Author IconMail Icon
Rated: ASR | (4.0)
Wonderful.Today so many people go about life without actually living it. Your poem speaks of those who choose do so. Their lives revolve around some crummy mindless job that doesn't require anything except a robotic soul.Our spirits get lost in those types of jobs.
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Review by Nora Wilde Author IconMail Icon
Rated: ASR | (4.5)
Great story about unrequited love.I have been you and I almost ran away from true love after years of keeping my guard up. Keep writing!
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Review by Nora Wilde Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | (4.5)
You have shared how cleansing a walk in the rain can be. When I was younger I loved to stay out in the rain. Your poem reminded me of all those happy times.
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Review by Nora Wilde Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | (4.5)
You give a bird's eye view of how different an autisic child is like from a very early age. Your story was well written and educational. Stay strong and keep writing.
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Review by Nora Wilde Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | (4.0)
The poll should have given more options for USA.
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Review by Nora Wilde Author IconMail Icon
Rated: 13+ | (3.0)
You were very descriptive about what the city was like, but fell short in purveying the depth of grief the couple felt over lossing their pet. I have lost a dear pet and my grief was as strong as if it were a family member. You do have a stong sense of explaining the stories surroundings. As I read your descriptions I could picture them in my mind. Your writing gives me the feeling you are very intelligent.
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