Great. I like the beat and the rhyme makes the poem familiar to me. Juxtaposing shepards and kings is always a good thing for Christmas. The poem has a really nice mix of imagary of old and new such as the christmas wrapping of presents and the Nativity star.
This is good work.
Tony Parker
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