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Rated: E | (4.5)
i really look forward to reading what happens next. this story pulled me in and left me wanting more. job well done. PLEASE continue !
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Rated: 13+ | (3.0)
this could be a good piece. it needs more emphasis on the question you're asking , "what is love" ? perhaps arrangement of the line but you held out a hand in the dark for me. rewording or an inclination to the hand in the dark being held out.
keep writing !
teresa
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Rated: 13+ | (3.5)
it is an emotional piece. perhaps an actual experience. the best writings come from heartfelt feelings we've felt. i enjoy reading pieces i can relate to through experience.
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Rated: E | (5.0)
this moved every emotion across my being like goosebumps in a chilly night.
great writing , great emotion and great job done.
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