I like you story very much, it's really funny in a way and my favorite but is when Hal makes all the excuses to why he was late for work and that he was just late in general. however coming to the end i did not quite understand it, it was a bit confusing but besides that it's a very funny lovely story
lol thats quite funny to be honest :P first i was like huh and i reread it and as like ohhh lol it is truly funny !! my you could try and do some more parodies :) i would be happy to write some too, i think i know a lot of parodies by other people and by myself.
Very intresting piece you have wrote even though i and not a person whom will read bibles or things about it , i liked the story though. I had to read it over twice because the first time i couldn't quite understand it and them once i read it again i enjoyed it very much :D
happy writing xP :D :P
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