Sounds like these two are having affairs on each other. I always see those boards and pins on police shows about how they solve crimes. They use knitting yarns and I would be confused. Nicely written details and detective, hos wife and their lovers. This is interesting. Well rounded characters and a good scenario. Always: Megan
Nicely written details and a good word flow. A nice style. Plains. Radiant in the hot sun. Grasses bow in respect. A blessed world. Some food for thought. Some good descriptions. This holds the reader's interest. Looks like you spent time with this. I enjoyed reading this. Always: Megan
Nicely written details and a good word flow. It is always nice to be safe and warm on winter nights by a fire, sitting in your favorite set. A pet is nice as well. Creative and colorful with lovely reflections. A neat rhyme pattern rounds this out with a good flair. I enjoyed reading this. Always: Megan
Nicely written details and a good word flow. A castle sinking. So sad. Easy to follow with good descriptions. Good drama and suspense. Looks like you spent time with this. A neat rhyme pattern puts the words in order, balances this out with a good flair. I enjoyed reading this. Always: Megan
Nicely written details and a good word flow. A glass of wine sounds nice. It is good to be pampered. A good style and easy to follow. I will pass on bee stings. Chocolate. Music. Lovely reflections. A neat rhyme pattern puts the words in motion and rounds this out with a good flair. I enjoyed reading this. Always: Megan
Nicely written details and a good word flow with mixed emotions. Easy to follow and looks like you spent time with this. It is never easy to lose someone. We try to go forward. Creative and colorful. A neat rhyme pattern balances tgis out, blends the words together and rounds this out with a good flair. I enjoyed reading this. Always: Megan
Nicely written details and a good word flow. I am thankful, too for the story tellers and poets here. It is a fun place and way to get to know others in the writing craft. A good style and easy to follow. Well chosen words. I love the orange type used. Thanks for sharing. Always: Megan
Nicely written details and a young girl seeing a strange light from her bed. She wanted to make friends with the light and she became their main meal because the creature didn't know the word friend. She didn't have long to live so she didn't care. Well rounded characters and suitable along with a good storyline. Always: Megan
Nicely written details and dreams are like stars in the sky. Good call. A nice style. A good scenario. Well chosen words. Facing struggles. Dreams coming true. Well chosen words and dreams are good aspirations. A neat rhyme pattern sums this up with a good flair. Always: Megan
Nicely written details and a good word flow. A poetry jam sounds interesting. The topics I heard can be intense. Drinking. Quite a topic. A plastic straw. My cat likes those. A neat rhyme pattern puts the words in motion and rounds this out with a good flair. I enjoyed reading this. Always: Megan
Nicely written details and a good word flow. Food for thought. Good words of wisdom and encouragement. This is uplifting, inspiring and enlightening. A neat rhyme pattern puts the words in motion and rounds this out with a good flair. Written from the heart. Always: Megan
Nicely written details and a good word flow. Storms do take on personalities of their own. Describing June, July and August weather storms. Good call. This gets the reader's interest. Storms aren't always fun in April, either. A good presentation. Always: Megan
Nicely written details and a good word flow. Some good romantic sentiments and overtures. A good style and this holds the reader's interest. A neat rhyme pattern puts the words in motion and rounds this out with a good flair. It is always a pleasure to read your writing. Always: Megan
Nicely written details and a good word flow. Hush. Sometimes, nights are too quiet. Listening for a heartbeat. Hearing a melody. Sounds lonesome. Some sad reflections. This is creative and colorful. Looks like you spent time with this. A good presentation. Always:Megan
This holds the reader's interest. A man poisoned the woman's wine. Were they lovers? What had she done? This draws the reader in and asks question. The dialogue is easy to understand. The woman was spellbound. Creative and this gets the reader's attention. Thanks for sharing. Always: Megan
Nicely written details and a good word flow. I hate when ornaments fall off the tree. Darth Vader fell off and broke my angel ornaments. My English knight fell off the tree and broke his arm. Good descriptions and easy to follow. Creative and colorful. A good play on words from words prompt. A nice presentation. Always: Megan
Nicely written details and well rounded characters. The youngest boy likes being the baby but doesn't want to be called one. A good style and easy to follow. Cute dialogue. Easy to follow and this holds the reader's interest. The mother is pleased with them. I enjoyed reading this. Always: Megan
Nicely written details and cats are moody but beautiful. They have unique personalities and observed these qualities in your cats. A good style and easy to follow. Your cats make for good living characters. Food for thought and easy to follow. Looks like you spent time with this. This holds the reader's interest. A good presentation. Always: Megan
Nicely written details and Proverbs. Solomon. You included links and explained things about Proverbs we should all know. Looks like you spent time with this and researched this and did comparisons. This rounds out nicely. Words of wisdom and this is enlightening. I enjoyed reading this. Always; Megan
Nicely written details and a good word flow. God and Jesus see everything we do. A waving hand from us and God has a way of sending messages back. Easy to follow and this is uplifting and inspiring. A good style. Words of wisdom. I enjoyed reading this. Always: Megan
Nicely written details and a good word flow. A song. A smile. They both go together. Creative and colorful. Some good reflections. Easy to follow. Creative and colorful. A neat rhyme pattern puts the words in motion, blends them together and sums this up with a good flair. Good presentation. Always: Megan
Nicely written details and going to college is scary. I went to a small, private Catholic College and it was all new. I loved it. You will adjust and make new friends and be happy. This is well written and easy to follow. A good style. Best wishes. Always: Megan
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Nicely written details and my son is home for 10 days. He lives in Oregon and texts 5 times a year. He texts pictures of his dogs and scenery. We lose them when they grow up. A good style and easy to follow. Heart touching and well defined. I enjoyed reading this. Always: Megan
Nicely written details and seeing a moose up close and deer from a train. Some good descriptions and neat imagery. Sad this was the old man's last trip but seems like he left the world content and at peacel. Easy to follow and creative. A nice presentation. Always: Megan
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Nicely written details and mothers take care of babies better then fathers. This man used duct tape for her diaper and seems he had a plan. Entertaining and he got the hob done. Creative and colorful. I smiled as I read this. Looks like this was fun to write. I enjoyed reading this. Always: Megan
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