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Rated: E | (4.5)
Hey author

First line definitely a tongue twister
Definitely something I wasn't expecting:)
Keep on writing and amazing the people with your unique writing and imagination
but well done this one definitely shocked me I actually thought that it would end differently
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Rated: 13+ | (4.5)
well that's a twist and even a delight in the middle of August 2024
it's nice to see a change in stories from Santa Claus but I mean Santa needs a break to i mean keeping up with all that work in one night and all of the children in the worlds wishes must be hard for him.
I find this so good and funny
so well done
and keep writing some interesting stories, novels, poems, short stories, etc.
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Rated: E | (4.5)
Firstly: Wow!!
I think the last time I was that intrigued was in high school. It was a great short story, especially when you used the metaphor to describe the movement of the woman's eye. I really enjoyed reading it, and I encourage you to write more.
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