This short stoy makes a great mystery event. This one seems to be more realistic than more typical stories about aliens. The story also seem to have a conspiracy event (with the cover up of a man's death). The martians seem to be more of parasites than aliens.
This is the best story I've ever red. People believed Angela was a souless monster and she herself considered it a curse. The ending was very sad and unpredictable. Those locals were really genocidal. They would condemn her just for what others of her kind did.
The story is good, but it would take reading it a few more times before I can fully understand what was going on in it. Like who was the dead girl, did Jim die, and what was the main character's name. But still, I had a lot fun reading it. Keep up the good work.
This story is pretty much as good as any short story could get. I wish it was a lot more detailed thogh. It didn't even seem to have that much of an ending. But was interesting that the the story kept using its own title as part of the narrating. Good story.
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