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Rated: 18+ | (4.5)
Wow this is amazing! There's lots of great detail, I wish that i could write as well as that. I really felt sorry for Juel, I felt empathy as it would be traumatizing and upsetting to be in that situation. My favourite part is the ending as it's left on a cliffhanger which makes me want to read more! *Bigsmile*
Awesome!

Beth x

PS- please may you take a look at a few chapters of my book that I'm writing, i need some advice *Bigsmile*
Thanks
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