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Review of Let Me Apologize  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (5.0)
O' Apologetic One --*S*

This piece was both sweet and endearing.
You're plight to be forgiven is what I was hearing.*S*
I hope that 'they' heard you and the let down was a brief spell.
I hope post the poem, your love life has been swell.
Time will tell if any permanent damage was done
If 'they' doesn't accept your APOLOGY(like JAY Z said) 'they' 'LOST ONE'.
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Review of Overflow  Open in new Window.
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Rated: ASR | (3.5)
To find release from the angry beast
Is to find the "SWEETEST PEACE".
They weren't worth it-- be it fam or friend
I dig your resolve post COUNTING TO 10.*S*

Writing is a great way to go on an EXHALE BINGE
Keep Writing--- I'll certainly be Reading YOU Again.*S*
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Review by TheQui Author IconMail Icon
Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
Woah & Wow! What a powerful story, nice set up. I had no idea where this was going, but I was along for the ride, (as Sherman seemed like a fun enough guy, I too was persuaded without question to continue the read & journey). I was totally caught off guard by the ending, but I am impressed and want to encourage you on your now "infamous exit". I don't know how many men would have had found that an 'easy' situation, (if they were serious about they're 2wk old wedding vows). Kudos to you and Condolences in the same. Sherman was just a fun guy, a GUYS GUY-- we women pick up on the frequency easy, but I'm sure Sherman meant no harm.*S* Celebrate your relationship and laugh at Shermans last gesture... he didn't know.
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