I am reading through your story and I find it to be a excellent mixture of setting and themes that blend well together. The relationship between the two protagonists is very fluid and natural.
I am writing one of my own so your thoughts on my story would be most appreciated.
PS have yet to try the lord of the rings and harry potter route but will get round to it
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