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Rated: E | (5.0)
Nice one. I know what you're talkin about.
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Review by casualwriter Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | (5.0)
This is great so keep it up!!!

You start off by building tension and keep the tension going until the end and when the character finds out that there will be a war between the living and the dead the character is struck with horror. the way you ended it on a cliffhanger is a very good idea and draws the reader into wanting to read more and find out what happens.

Cant wait to read the rest of it!

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