confused's (thelovelybones) Reviews

confused

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19 Public Reviews Given

19 Total Reviews Given

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#3645414

Review of Hope

Review by confused

Rated: E

| (2.5)

its very simple, but not in a too positive way. i feel very detactched to this poem, like if words had mass, these would have fallen harder than lead. i feel it could have great potential though. it just needs some work

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#3643555

Review of Thank you God for another day.

Review by confused

Rated: E | N/A (Unratable.)

aww, this is adorable!!! im soo glad that there are still people who are not afraid to write about jesus.

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#3643489

Review of Seabreeze

Review by confused

Rated: E

| (4.0)

super cute!!!

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#3643411

Review of My Angel

Review by confused

Rated: E

| (4.0)

this is truly lovely. i adore it!

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#3643407

Review of Uncommon choice

Review by confused

Rated: E

| (4.0)

everyone feels like an outsider at some point. you just have to jump in, and become apart of the art.

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#3643391

Review of Will you help me?

Review by confused

Rated: E

| (3.5)

very...sporadic?? i like it!

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#3643382

Review of Frustration

Review by confused

Rated: E

| (3.0)

although it is very mysterious, i can see no real plot in it. it has great potential though. i enjoyed reading it.

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#3643353

Review of RRRIIIPPP!!!

Review by confused

Rated: 13+

| (5.0)

i swear on all that is holy and pure i will always listen to my mother from now on!!! oh my gosh! lolZ. great story, i really enjoyed it.

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#3643325

Review of I Can Wrestle My Dad

Review by confused

Rated: E

| (4.5)

this is very aggressive. i sense that you didnt have a good relationship with your father? if i am wrong, i apologize, that is just the vibe i get.

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#3643062

Review of Love Relationship

Review by confused

Rated: E

| (3.0)

i feel it has great potential, but it wavers back in forth from friendship to romance rockily. i feel there should be a smoother transition if this is intended, but otherwise good job!

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#3643054

Review of lonely roads

Review by confused

Rated: E

| (4.0)

i LOVE the imagery. i felt like i was there, feeling the soft mountain breeze, inhaling the heady scent of autumn. this poem it truly beautiful.