Haha, i quite enjoyed reading this. I didn't feel like it flowed much, but enjoyed reading anyway :) I mainly like this bit " Violated my eardrums, and we both enjoyed it" It made me chuckle. Good work.
Haha, i really liked this, from the veiw point of a person who doesn't wear make up or straighten my curly hair. Natural beauty is far the best! haha. Also, thanks for reveiwing my poem, feel free to read the other's in my collection. Well done on your poem :) have a nice day xx
Awww this is so beautiful. I am away at uni at the moment and i really want to go home and just walk my dog (and see my family boyfriend too obviously) though walking Gizmo is something i have really missed and him being really excited when i get through the door, kinda makes the day really extra special. I can imagine how it must feel and it would be a awful experience. Though at least she had a very good life :)
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