First of all, my reviews are intended to be helpful and encouraging, not hurtful in any way.
Any comments are only my personal ideas and meant as suggestions. I'm not an editor, proof-reader, or any of the like. I'm just a guy with an opinion that I'm here to share, and if you disagree with anything I say here, remember that the only opinion that matters is yours.
I came across your poem "Pufferfish" using the Read and Review link and I'm glad I found this.
This is really short piece but is a very well written poem. Easy to follow with a good word, nice style and good presentation. It has a really good rhyme pattern which gives this a nice flair and makes the words stand out.
It is a pleasure to read.I found no spelling/grammar errors to report and no additions or deletions to ponder! I have no suggestions for you to consider regarding your writing.
First of all, my reviews are intended to be helpful and encouraging, not hurtful in any way.
Any comments are only my personal ideas and meant as suggestions. I'm not an editor, proof-reader, or any of the like. I'm just a guy with an opinion that I'm here to share, and if you disagree with anything I say here, remember that the only opinion that matters is yours.
Hey, RadioShea! How are you today ? I hope you are okay.
I came across your script using the "Read and Review" link. I don't usually read scripts, but I'm glad I took the time to read this.
The characters are great and I love the way can feel the main characters.
The dialogued are natural and spontaneous. It seems credible indeed. The narrative style is perfect. The description is rich and there are lively scenes. The script delivers a story that is thought-provoking, stylish, sprightly poignant and a good look on the loneliness and of modern life and despair. It holds the attention from start to finish.
I found no spelling/grammar errors to report and no additions or deletions to ponder!
I came across your poem "A Spring Bell" using the Read and Review link and I'm really happy I found this little poem.
First of all, my reviews are intended to be helpful and encouraging, not hurtful in any way.
Any comments are only my personal ideas and meant as suggestions. I'm not an editor, proof-reader, or any of the like. I'm just a guy with an opinion that I'm here to share, and if you disagree with anything I say here, remember that the only opinion that matters is yours.
It was a pleasure to read it. This piece have a neat style, a good word flow, excellent structure and is really well done. The length is perfect and you use an style that is very appealing to the reader. I liked the way you presented it. Joybells are one of my favorite shape poems.
I found no spelling/grammar errors to report and no additions or deletions to ponder!
You have accomplished a great deal in just a few words. I wouldn't want it changed.
First of all, my reviews are intended to be helpful and encouraging, not hurtful in any way.
Any comments are only my personal ideas and meant as suggestions. I'm not an editor, proof-reader, or any of the like. I'm just a guy with an opinion that I'm here to share, and if you disagree with anything I say here, remember that the only opinion that matters is yours.
I came across your poem "Showing my Heart" using the Read and Review link and I'm really happy I found this.
You did a fantastic job crafting a unique take on this and created not just a beautiful poem but also a really meaningful, relatable and excellent work. There's a lot of emotion in this poem an the tone suits it very well.
No spelling errors or grammar issues noted, but I may have missed some. I have no suggestions for you to consider regarding your writing.
You have accomplished a great deal in just a few words. I truly appreciate your work.
First of all, my reviews are intended to be helpful and encouraging, not hurtful in any way.
Any comments are only my personal ideas and meant as suggestions. I'm not an editor, proof-reader, or any of the like. I'm just a guy with an opinion that I'm here to share, and if you disagree with anything I say here, remember that the only opinion that matters is yours.
I came across your poem "Maisie Mae" using the Read and Review link and I'm glad I found this.
I loved your poem and was touched as I read it. You did a fantastic job crafting a unique take on this and created not just a beautiful poem but also a really meaningful piece.
This is a very well written poem. Easy to follow with a good word, nice style and good presentation. This piece has a really good rhyme pattern which gives this a nice flair and makes the words stand out.
It is a pleasure to read.I found no spelling/grammar errors to report and no additions or deletions to ponder! I have no suggestions for you to consider regarding your writing.
Any comments are only my personal ideas and meant as suggestions.I'm not an editor, proof-reader, or any of the like. I'm just a guy with an opinion that I'm here to share, and if you disagree with anything I say here, remember that the only opinion that matters is yours.{/justify}
I came across your poem "What's What" using the Read and Review link and I'm really happy I found this piece.
Your poem is well written, flows nicely and evoked really some feelings in me as I read it. I thought the title of this poem is very good and appropriate.
You have a special way with your words--a tone which pulls me in. It's really well written and you know how to do a good presentation!
I found no spelling/grammar errors to report and no additions or deletions to ponder!
You have accomplished a great deal in just a few words. I wouldn't want it changed.
Keep on writing and thank for sharing this. Best wishes for you!
Any comments are only my personal ideas and meant as suggestions.I'm not an editor, proof-reader, or any of the like. I'm just a guy with an opinion that I'm here to share, and if you disagree with anything I say here, remember that the only opinion that matters is yours.
I came across your story "The Hall Closet" using the Read and Review link and I really enjoyed reading your story.
You write dialogue very well and it keeps your story moving forward nicely. This piece have a neat style, a good word flow, excellent structure and is really well done. The length is perfect and you use an style that is very appealing to the reader am I really liked the way you presented it.
No spelling errors or grammar issues noted. You have used grammar consistently here. There is nothing to distract the reader from their reading pleasure.
I have no suggestions for improvement. Great storytelling in four lines with an added chuckle. Well done.
Any comments are only my personal ideas and meant as suggestions.I'm not an editor, proof-reader, or any of the like. I'm just a guy with an opinion that I'm here to share, and if you disagree with anything I say here, remember that the only opinion that matters is yours.
I came across your story "Girlfriend" using the Read and Review link and I really enjoyed reading your story.
It is nicely written and well structured. There's a lot of emotion in this story an the tone suits the piece and the plot very well. I like the way you write dialogues, it really has a nice flow. I love your way of involving the reader in the story. This story also show your hability to present a good imagery.
No spelling errors or grammar issues noted. You have used grammar consistently here. There is nothing to distract the reader from their reading pleasure.
You have accomplished a great deal in just a few words.
Any comments are only my personal ideas and meant as suggestions.I'm not an editor, proof-reader, or any of the like. I'm just a guy with an opinion that I'm here to share, and if you disagree with anything I say here, remember that the only opinion that matters is yours.
I came across your story "The last Elf and the Santa conspiracy " using the Read and Review link and I'm glad I found this piece.
It is nicely written and well structured. The plot is straight forward and moves along logically and it presents rounded characters and suitable dialogue.
No spelling errors or grammar issues noted, but I may have missed some. I have no suggestions for you to consider regarding your writing.In fact you painted your story brilliantly for your readers.
You have accomplished a great deal in just a few words. I truly appreciate your work.
How are you today? I hope you're having a nice day!
Any comments are only my personal ideas and meant as suggestions.I'm not an editor, proof-reader, or any of the like. I'm just a guy with an opinion that I'm here to share, and if you disagree with anything I say here, remember that the only opinion that matters is yours.
I came across your text "People are Not Wearing Masks" using the Read and Review link and I'm glad I found this.
I usually don't read essays, but I think this one is really interesting. As a future doctor (I'm on med school), I agree with you: stores and other businesses definitely should not be allowed people in if they are not wearing a mask.
It's really upsetting, like why those people keep doing it ? Sometimes seems they really don't care about the others.
Frankly, I think that refusing to wear a face covering for any reason is an act of selfishness.
I found no spelling errors or gramar issues but I may have missed some.I have no suggestions for you to consider regarding your writing.
Thank you for sharing this piece of writing with us, I truly appreciate your talent.
Any comments are only my personal ideas and meant as suggestions.I'm not an editor, proof-reader, or any of the like. I'm just a guy with an opinion that I'm here to share, and if you disagree with anything I say here, remember that the only opinion that matters is yours.
I came across your story "The Moon Began to Glitch" using the Read and Review link and I'm really glad I found this piece.
Your story is well written, flows nicely and the rhythm moves the narrative forward at a good pace. You have a special way with your words--a tone which pulls me in. The length is perfect and it grabs all the reader's attention and makes them want to read on.
I found no spelling/grammar errors to report and no additions or deletions to ponder!
I truly appreciate your talent. I have no suggestions for you to consider regarding your writing.
Keep up the good work.Best wishes with your work and thank for sharing this!
Hey, How are you today? I hope you're having a nice day!
Any comments are only my personal ideas and meant as suggestions.I'm not an editor, proof-reader, or any of the like. I'm just a guy with an opinion that I'm here to share, and if you disagree with anything I say here, remember that the only opinion that matters is yours.
I came across your story "Trust" using the Read and Review link and I'm really happy I found this piece
It was a pleasure to read it. This piece have a neat style, a good word flow, excellent structure and is really well done. The length is perfect and you use an style that is very appealing to the reader.I liked the way you presented it, centered.
I found no spelling errors or gramar issues but I may have missed some.I have no suggestions for you to consider regarding your writing.
How are you today? I hope you're having a better day!
Any comments are only my personal ideas and meant as suggestions.I'm not an editor, proof-reader, or any of the like. I'm just a guy with an opinion that I'm here to share, and if you disagree with anything I say here, remember that the only opinion that matters is yours.
I came across your journal entry using the "Read & Review" link.
I haven't been writing so I undestand you. Med School is making impossible to me do recreational reading. Sometimes life keeps betting on our way.
Any comments are only my personal ideas and meant as suggestions.I'm not an editor, proof-reader, or any of the like. I'm just a guy with an opinion that I'm here to share, and if you disagree with anything I say here, remember that the only opinion that matters is yours.
I came across your poem "August" using the Read and Review link and I'm really happy I found this piece.
I really liked it.It is nicely written and well structured.No spelling errors or grammar issues noted. You write powerfully and articulate the emotions here very well.
You have accomplished a great deal in just a few words. I like this poem as it is in its full sincerity and originality. I wouldn't want it changed.
Best wishes with your work. Thanks for sharing your story.
How are you today? I hope you're having a nice day!
Any comments are only my personal ideas and meant as suggestions.I'm not an editor, proof-reader, or any of the like. I'm just a guy with an opinion that I'm here to share, and if you disagree with anything I say here, remember that the only opinion that matters is yours.
I came across your poem "new fears" using the Read and Review link and I'm glad I found this.
I really liked it.I'm actually really glad I stopped to read it.
This is a fantastic piece. The title is enigmatic and attention grabbing. It is nicely written and well structured.There's a lot of emotion in this poem an the tone suits the piece and plot very well. No spelling errors or grammar issues noted. You did a good job with your rhymes too!
You have accomplished a great deal in just a few words. I like this poem as it is in its full sincerity and originality. I wouldn't want it changed.
Best wishes with your work. Thanks for sharing your story.
How are you today? I hope you're having a nice day!
Please take anything I say here as my personal observations.I'm not an editor, proof-reader, or a expert and don't profess to be one.
I came across your poem "Expectations" using the Read and Review link and I'm really glad I found this piece.
I have no criticisms for your story, just praise. I love what you’ve written. There are so many things to like about this poem.
I love the connection between your title and the contents of your poem. Easy to follow and impressive. You have accomplished a great deal in just a few words.
Please take anything I say here as my personal observations. I'm no expert and don't profess to be one.
I found your poem "ROSE AND THE THORNS" on the read and review page and I really liked it.I'm actually really glad I stopped to read it.
This is a fantastic piece. The title is enigmatic and attention grabbing. It is nicely written and well structured.There's a lot of emotion in this poem an the tone suits the piece and plot very well.No spelling errors or grammar issues noted. You dod a good job with your rhymes too!
You have accomplished a great deal in just a few words.
I found your poem "The Last One on the Shelf" on the read and review page. Any comments are only my personal ideas and meant as suggestions.
This piece have a neat style and a good word flow. A nice rhyme pattern puts the words into perspective and gives this a great flair. It is a pleasure to read.
I found no spelling/grammar errors to report and no additions or deletions to ponder! I have no suggestions for you to consider regarding your writing.
Thanks for sharing this.
Keep up the good work and keep on writing! Good Job!
Hello, Mara McBain. I hope you're having a nice day!
Please take anything I say here as my personal observations.I'm no expert and don't profess to be one.
I found your story on the read and review page.This is a beautifully written piece. Wow!I truly enjoyed reading your short story. This story is nicely written and well structured. A neat tone with a good word flow and I like the style.
I imagine you put a lot of thought and time went into this.
I really liked your short story "For The Love Of Dango". It's nicely written and a very piece. Good job on showing Tomoya, Sanae, Sunohara and the others characters!
This story also show your hability to present a good imagery. A nice play on words an is easy to follow.
I enjoyed reading your poem "Demented Christmas". I cannot decide what's my favorite line, I like them all!
You used language very well, and this piece of poetry has a really word flowand neat style. Never thought I would like so much a horror story about Santa Claus.
I really liked your short story "Trail Mixed". It was entertaining and really well writen.
At least I think that it is. Once I started reading it, I couldn't stop until I finished it. This story has some great examples of paragraphs and a good word flow.
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