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Review of Drowning  Open in new Window.
Rated: ASR | (5.0)
My heart sank while reading this. Was she actually trying to drown or are you using drowning as a metaphor? Either way, this is truly an exceptional poem. I do not have any criticisms about the writing style or technique, since it is your own and you are writing this for someone. I have read another poem by you, about turning forty, and that too was well written. You are a wonderful writer and I will definitely be reading more of your work.


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Review of The Reflection  Open in new Window.
Rated: E | (5.0)
I must say, this poem is absolutely touching. I felt sadness and grief, which is oddly a great thing because it means your writing is great! The only criticism I must give, is some punctuation errors (in my opinion). In the second stanza, third line "Fear is her enemy. She'll never learn"., I would have used a semi-colon: "Fear is her enemy; she'll never learn" since it leads into the next line. Other than that, your poem was fantastic! I will definitely read more.
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Rated: E | (4.5)
Very well written. It actually brought tears to my eyes; that's how much I can relate to it.
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Absolutely beautiful. Your wife is one lucky woman :)
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